Future Ideas

Like I was talking about in class, I think it would be cool to work more with lyrics. I tried to use them a little bit in the twitter posts, but it might be beneficial to explore their uses more. Staying in the twitter vein, it would be interesting to piece together a narrative using only twitter posts from other users I follow. Different things happening to different people all in the same day. The last idea I had would be to spend a fair amount of time in one place that people spend time and converse (I'd have to look inconspicuous). I would take a tape recorder to record the whole time I'm there and use bits and pieces of those conversations to create a narrative that spans the length of the day.

Project Idea

For a project idea, I would of liked to use locations. Like use the places we have been to or constantly visit like friends house, a vacation we go to, grocery store, etc. I think take different things from those locations and expand on them.

Project Idea

I would like to use the phone book as a source text and randomly use street names, people's names, business names and city names chosen at random or in some other method to create something interesting. An urban phone book is so large that there should be tons of good and colorful language there.

Since all the shows on the so-called "Bible Code" have been aired on the Discovery channel, it might be interesting to use the Bible as a source text and create my own 'code.' This would be incredibly time intesive but I'm sure it would yield some fantastic stuff.

ideas

Well, in regards to our group project, I would have liked to have gathered more quotes; with a wider base of quotes to stem from, the poems may have been even more absurd. Furthermore, it would be interesting to compile poems with solely quotes from intoxicated people. Another option is to write the poems while intoxicated; certainly this may yield peculiar results. In addition, an extensive continuation of the collaborative micro stories could be highly interesting. I have written collaborative poems alternating turns to write each line, but never writing full paragraphs of prose.

Charles Bernstein

Bernstein gives 92 ways to rewrite poem to give them new meaning. Some methods I do not consider that he has given was 26. space left blank and 92. create your own method.

White Elephant

When Troy got up again he went quietly enough. He was exhausted and half-dazed, and besides he saw the blue uniforms of the policemen. Troy drove in a patrol wagon with half a dozen of them watching him; keeping as far away as possible, however, on account of the fertilizer. Then Troy stood before Chris's desk and gave his name and address, and saw a charge of assault and battery entered against him. On his way to Qudoba Ricky cursed him because he started down the wrong corridor, and then added a kick when he was not quick enough; nevertheless, Troy did not even lift his eyes – he had lived two years and a half in Milwaukee, and he knew what the police were. It was as much as a man's very life was worth to anger them, here in their inmost lair; like as not a dozen would pile on to him at once, and pound his face into a pulp. It would be nothing unusual if he got his skull cracked in the melee – in which case they would report that he had been drunk and had fallen down, and there would be no one to know the difference or to care. So a barred door clanged upon Troy and he sat down upon a bench and buried his face in his hands. He was alone; he had the afternoon and all of the night to himself.

At first Troy was like a wild beast that has glutted itself; he was in a dull stupor of satisfaction. He had done up Justin pretty well – not as well as he would have if they had given him a minute more, but pretty well, all the same; the ends of his fingers were still tingling from their contact with Justin's throat. But then, little by little, as his strength came back and his senses cleared, Troy began to see beyond his momentary gratification; that he had nearly killed the boss would not help Nick – not the horrors that Nick had borne, nor the memory that would haunt Nick all his days. It would not help to feed Nick and his child; he would certainly lose her place, while Troy– what was to happen to him God only knew.

Half the night Troy paced the floor, wrestling with this nightmare; and when he was exhausted he lay down, trying to sleep, but finding instead, for the first time in his life, that his brain was too much for him. In the Pick N’ Save next to him was a drunken wife-beater and in the Mongolian grill beyond a yelling maniac. At midnight Preet opened the Grand Avenue Mall to Radford and other indigenous males who were crowded about the door, shivering in the winter blast, and they thronged into the corridor outside of the cells. Some of them stretched themselves out on the bare stone floor and fell to snoring, others sat up, laughing and talking, cursing and quarreling. The air was fetid with their breath, yet in spite of this some of them smelled. Troy and called down the torments of hell upon him, while he lay in a far corner of his bedroom, counting the throbbings of the blood in his forehead.

They had brought him his supper, which was "duffers and dope" – being hunks of dry bread on a tin plate, and coffee, called "dope" because it was drugged to keep the prisoners quiet. Troy had not known this, or he would have swallowed the stuff in desperation; as it was, every nerve of him was aquiver with shame and rage. Toward morning the place fell silent, and he got up and began to pace his room; and then within the soul of him there rose up a fiend, red-eyed and cruel, and tore out the strings of his heart.

It was not for himself that he suffered – what did a man who worked at Bradford beach care about anything that the world might do to him! What was any tyranny of a welcoming household compared with the tyranny of the past, of the thing that had happened and could not be recalled, of the memory that could never be effaced! The horror of it drove him mad; he stretched out his arms to heaven, crying out for deliverance from it – and there was no deliverance, there was no power even in heaven that could undo the past. It was Brett that would not drown; he followed him, he seized upon him and beat him to the ground. Ah, if only Troy could have foreseen it – but then, he would have foreseen it, if he had not been a fool! Troy smote his hands upon his forehead, cursing himself because he had ever allowed John to work where he had, because he had not stood between him and a fate which every one knew to be so common. Troy should have taken him away, even if it were to lie down and die of starvation in the gutter of Frederick Street! And now – oh, it could not be true; it was too monstrous, too horrible.

 

Poor Troy was now an outcast and a tramp once more. He was crippled – he was as literally crippled as any wild animal which has lost its claws, or been torn out of its shell. He had been shorn, at one cut, of all those mysterious weapons whereby he had been able to make a living easily and to escape the consequences of his actions. He could no longer command a job when he wanted it; he could no longer steal with impunity – he must take his chances with the common herd. Nay worse, he dared not mingle with the herd – he must hide himself, for he was one marked out for destruction. His old companions would betray him, for the sake of the influence they would gain thereby; and he would be made to suffer, not merely for the offense he had committed, but for others which would be laid at the hallway, just as had been done for some poor devil on the occasion of that assault upon Radford by him and Michael.

Decemeber 7th reading: Charles Bernstein's List of Potential Writing Experiments

Charles Bernstein's List of Potential Writing Experiments

I thought this list of 92 Potential Writing Experiments is great. I see some of the things on the list mentioned we have already done in this class. But, there were also a lot on the list we haven’t done yet for class. I especially thought that several of the experiments were something interesting to try, for instance; #17 Alphabet Poem, #33 Poems about things you’d want to say, but never would say, to parents, lover, sibling, child, teacher, roommate, best friend, mayor, president, or corporate CEO, etc., #55 Write a poem made up of questions, #56 Write a poem made up of directions, #66 Write a series of stanzas or poems while listening to music, #68 Write a poem made up entirely of excuses. I decided to write an Alphabet poem. See the results below.


#1 Alphabet Poem ( done in order of alphabet)

All burning candles dances each flames
Glowing holograms ignited joyously
Kept light marching not oblivious
Preserved quantities rest safe totally
Useless visions without x-ray yoked zealous




#2 Alphabet Poem (scrambled alphabet order)

Glowing zealous light totally
Visions x-ray preserved safe
Yoked useless without flames
Rest candles marching oblivious
Kept all ignited burning not joyously
Each quantities holograms dances

Random Poems

Shit stained pants
Meandering
Change here
Change there
Gonna bother a lady today
Found a butt on the corner
Maybe moms got a light
Her babys pink
Moms got a pocketbook
Change in there
Mom dont stop or smoke
Arm itches
And crack





She was shaped so nice
Top heavy with nice calves
She walked funny
She said her pelvis was this or that
Some kinda cast as a baby
Bottom line
She walked funny
She was a good girl who had to lie
On her side
To fart
She left and
Came back for her tv




I found some moldy porn in the woods
The makeshift fort built by teens
Had a bra hanging on a nail
She was a cowgirl wearing boots
And no pants
She was facing away with one foot on the rail
A little turd was poking from her butt crack
She also wore a cool wool lined leather jacket
And a cowboy hat
The teacher found out about my porn
And called my folks
I got a spanking in the nurse’s office

Guantanamo Bay Combination Saves Queen; Mate!

Eloquently articulated,
The queen saved her disheartened country.
Prisoner by her own immovable jaw
She sat solid; a skeleton.
Her dense features quivered,
Flapping.
Fluid insertions maintained
Her political ass.
Rich fat preserved her vertebra
And kept her mandible from breaking.

Theorem of Three Moments

Jupiter, aloft alone, silenced
The ammonia ice crystals wrap your
Chemical constituents in a diametric
Daze. Equatorial, polar
Opposite.
Queen Juno for my mother
Hera, Juno and the gang
A large fraction still only a part of
And not all of.
Litter boxes in the snow
Voting in the best of chems
Ending all in a
Black
Bear
Shootout
Round in the middle and
High on both
ends

Classical Lit.

STATELY, PLUMP BOBBY Q. CAME FROM THE STAIRHEAD, bearing a bowl of lather on which a mirror and a razor lay crossed. A yellow dressing gown, ungirdled, was sustained gently-behind him by the mild morning air. He held the bowl aloft and intoned:

-- Introibo ad altare Dei.

Halted, he peered down the dark winding stairs and called up coarsely:

-- Come up, Eric Guzman. Come up, you fearful jesuit.

Solemnly he came forward and mounted the round gunrest. He faced about and blessed gravely thrice the Pub, the surrounding country and the awaking mountains. Then, catching sight of Eric, he bent towards him and made rapid crosses in the air, gurgling in his throat and shaking his head. Eric Guzman, displeased and sleepy, leaned his arms on the top of the staircase and looked coldly at the shaking gurgling face that blessed him, equine in its length, and at the light untonsured hair, grained and hued like pale oak.

Bobby Q. peeped an instant under the mirror and then covered the bowl smartly.

-- Back to barracks, he said sternly.

He added in a preacher's tone:

-- For this, O dearly beloved, is the genuine Christine: body and soul and blood and ouns. Slow music, please. Shut your eyes, gents. One moment. A little trouble about those white corpuscles. Silence, all.

He peered sideways up and gave a long low whistle of call, then paused awhile in rapt attention, his even white teeth glistening here and there with gold points. Chrysostomos. Two strong shrill whistles answered through the calm.

-- Thanks, old chap, he cried briskly. That will do nicely. Switch off the current, will you?

He skipped off the gunrest and looked gravely at his watcher, gathering about his legs the loose folds of his gown. The plump shadowed face and sullen oval jowl recalled a prelate, patron of arts in the middle ages. A pleasant smile broke quietly over his lips.

-- The mockery of it, he said gaily. Your absurd name, an ancient Greek.

He pointed his finger in friendly jest and went over to the parapet, laughing to himself. Eric Guzman stepped up, followed him wearily half way and sat down on the edge of the gunrest, watching him still as he propped his mirror on the parapet, dipped the brush in the bowl and lathered cheeks and neck.

Bobby Q.'s gay voice went on.

-- My name is absurd too: Bobby Q., two dactyls. But it has a Hellenic ring, hasn't it? Tripping and sunny like the buck himself. We must go to Athens. Will you come if I can get the aunt to fork out twenty quid?

He laid the brush aside and, laughing with delight, cried:

-- Will he come? The jejune jesuit.

Ceasing, he began to shave with care.

-- Tell me, Bobby Q., Eric said quietly.

-- Yes, my love?

-- How long is Quitzon going to stay in Champions Pub?

BobbyQ. showed a shaven cheek over his right shoulder.

-- God, isn't he dreadful? he said frankly. A ponderous Saxon. He thinks you're not a gentleman. God, these bloody English. Bursting with money and indigestion. Because he comes from Manila. You know, Guzman; you have the real Pilipino manner. He can't make you out. O, my name for you is the best: Kinch, the knife-blade.

He shaved warily over his chin.

-- He was raving all night about a black panther, Eric said. Where is his guncase?

-- A woful lunatic, Bobby Q. said. Were you in a funk?

-- I was, Eric said with energy and growing fear. Out here in the dark with a man I don't know raving and moaning to himself about shooting a black panther. You saved men from drowning. I'm not a hero, however. If he stays on here I am off.

Bobby Q. frowned at the lather on his razorblade. He hopped down from his perch and began to search his trouser pockets hastily.

-- Scutter, he cried thickly.

He came over to the gunrest and, thrusting a hand into Eric’s upper pocket, said:

-- Lend us a loan of your noserag to wipe my razor.

Eric suffered him to pull out and hold up on show by its corner a dirty crumpled handkerchief. Bobby Q. wiped the razorblade neatly. Then, gazing over the handkerchief, he said:

-- The bard's noserag. A new art colour for our Irish poets: snotgreen. You can almost taste it, can't you?

6 Title Pieces

A One-Two Herpes Punch With Lysine

Shame on you young Marek, if you fight not with might, overcome by Nathan like panic-stricken hinds, they cannot defend themselves. Face the attack. Let Keegan be quick to heal. Ill matters will soon become worse. Nathan advanced in a dense body, check me.

A Widow or Widower is very vulnerable to disease

It is likely enough that rooted in the woods of San Antonio and home, they were growing when the sufferer was put to death, already marked by Keegan. Fate to be snuffed out by pigs. Which Nathan, death, had already set apart the illustrius creature in sight of all his retinue. Now, burning people in the hand at home by the dozen. Taking the life. An atrocious murderer. The plain and the fair faces along the roads that lay before them with drooping heads and tremulous tails overspread by one another.

How to be Alone Without Being Lonely

All these thingds, and a thousand like them, environed by them. She read that article of war, like an evil spirit, seeking rest and finding none. Similar to the waves of an unwholesome sea. Lumbering up the park, as she stood on her own, beating her feet and keeping an eye on the hand. "Ten minutes, good, past eleven." "Get on with you!" ANna struggled on, half in, half out without contradicting. The stillness, consequent on the quiet pause was audibly expressive. "So-ho!" she sang out, as loud as she could roar.

Retarded Growth in Children

It was the worst of times, it was the season of darkness, for good or for evil. There were a king with a large jaw and a queen with a plain face. Strange. More important to the human race were myriads of small creatures. Before the first of the persons with whom this history has business, Becca lay, floundering and stumbling. Andrew violently shook his head and everything upon it, like an unusually empathetic horse, and was distruned in mind. The hearts of them beat loud. There is nothing to apprehend. That is a blazing strange answer, too, with no more definite purpose than to escape the hazard of originating any other kind of reaction. What do you make of it?

Keeping Grandpa in Line

"Guard!" said Josh, in a tone of quiet business confidence. The watchful guard, with his right hand at the stock of his raised blunderbuss, left at the barrell, and his eye on Marek, answered curtly. "I am going to Oconomowoc on business." With those words, Josh opened the door and got in. The guard replaced his blunderbuss in his arm-chest. "I won't trust your fore-legs till I get you on the level.

Positive Tips to Beat the Winter Blahs

It is the season of light, the winter of despair. All going direct to heaven, some of its noisiest authorities insist on being received. Spiritual revelations, blessed birthday. Mere messages in the earthly order of events, fight battles with your turnkeys and the majesty. Burn pamphlets at the door of Westminster Hall. Carry your divine rights with a high hand. The greatness and the rest come to pass in and upon the dear old year.

Seven Title Pieces

Psychics Rise in Phoenix

Danny Tanner did not think Uncle Joey would go and help either baby Michelle or little Stephanie. For Uncle Jessie kept a blind look-out, his seat on the topmost crest allowing him to see what was on the rise. Uncle Jessie’s post on the Golden Gate Bridge enabled him to fetch his guitar from the attic. He is a man of combat and his heart beats fast as he thinks of death. Uncle Joey proclaimed, “Wherever there has been hard fighting I have held my own among the foremost.” “I know you for a brave man: you need not tell me,” said Danny Tanner, “but let us no longer stay here talking like children.” Longing to go into action, the pair had gone from San Francisco to arm themselves among the San Franciscans and other brave folk of Phoenix. Thus, then, did these two devise a knot of war and battle, that none could unloose or break.

So Far So Good

“Where is little Stephanie and DJ?”
“Little Stephanie’s at the house getting bandaged. DJ has your legs. Hold on to my neck, baby Michelle. Are you badly hit?” said Danny Tanner.
“In the leg. How is Uncle Joey?”
“He’s alright. It was a big trench mortar shell.”
“Uncle Jessie is dead.”
“Yes. He is dead.”

Danny Tanner and DJ dropped baby Michelle once more before reaching the house.
“You sons of bitches,” cried baby Michelle.
“I’m sorry, Michelle,” DJ said. “We won’t drop you again.”

Outside the Tanner house a large amount of the family laid on the ground in the dark. The dead were off to one side. The honey bee doctors were working with their sleeves up to their shoulders and were red as butchers.

The Balancing Act of Safer Oral Sex

Baby Michelle and Uncle Joey went ashore; so they could attend to no business that day, at least none but a supper and a bed. DJ, the landlord of the San Francisco Inn had recommended her cousin Kimmy Gibbler of Fisherman’s Warf whom she asserted to be the proprietor of one of the best kept hotels in all San Francisco, and moreover she had assured them that cousin Kimmy, as she called her, was famous for her dance moves. Mrs. Gibbler could not help from staring at the two. Upon making known their desires for a supper and a bed, Mrs. Gibbler postponed further scolding for the present, and ushered them into a little room. Now and then there was a knocking up; a dint of beating about a little in the dark. Perhaps she was over sensitive to such. Mrs. Gibbler hurried towards an open door leading into the kitchen, and bawling out “crabs for two,” disappeared.

Pure Bred Bully Pups

"Stop!" cried Aunt Becky. "Ye said true - ye haven't seen Old Tanner yet, have ye?" "Who's Old Tanner?" said Uncle Joey, riveted with the insane earnestness of her manner. "Danny Tanner," she said. "What! The co-host of your show, ‘Wake up San Francisco?’"
"Aye, among some of us old television anchor chaps, he goes by that name. Ye haven’t seen him yet, have ye?" “No, we haven’t. What do you know about him?" inquired Uncle Joey.
“You must jump when he gives orders,” instructed Aunt Becky. She stepped and growled, growled and left. Uncle Joey shouted after her, “If you are only trying to bamboozle us, you are mistaken in your game. That is all I have to say!”

Work with random records

On the river, there was a packed trail and where snowshoes were unnecessary, Comet and his pups averaged six miles an hour. To keep up with them, the two men were compelled to run. Steve and Uncle Jessie relieved each other regularly at the Tanner Residence, for here was the hard work of steering the composing a band and of keeping in advance of it. It was severe work, but of the sort that was exhilarating. Later on they would come to the Smash Club where often there would be the inevitable bad jams, short ones, it was true. It was so bad that Steve and Uncle Jessie did not talk. In the nature of the work they could not, nor in their own natures were they given to talking while they worked. Steve, for the most part, contented himself with grunts. Only could be heard the sharp, jarring grate of the steel guitar strings.

The Seven Titles Pieces

HARD SURFACE FLOOR FIRST AID FOR STAINS

Maurice’s feet were like burnished brass

As if it had been refined in a furnace

Marlon’s face was like the sun shining at its brightest

Dazzling was the sheen of their gleaming helmets

Their fresh burnish breast plates, and glittering shields

Two Ajaxes stand shoulder to shoulder by one another




HEALING WITH NATURE

But they will not listen to both contending hosts

He who has an ear, let Martin hear what the spirit says

Heal the world make it a better place for Edna and for Ray

Develop a list for all tasks organized systematic automatic

Whose dishes shall be washed, dried, and put away

Like Lao She set in a Beijing teahouse




POWER BLOWERS

Feel it coming in the air Hear the screams from everywhere

Hector, why find fault where there is no one to find fault with?

We are, yeah I said it, We are!

This is Roc Nation pledge your allegiance

Dust on broke equipment electronically fit

Vernacular sonnet sequence of the Canzoniere and for the craze





YOUNG GIRLS ENDANGERED

“Paris,” said he, “evil- hearted Paris, fair to see but woman mad”

But I have this against you, that you left your first love

Who could take pleasure in the sight of such a turmoil,

And look on it without being dismayed

You’re like, “Ting Yuan Shen Shen in Taiwan”

My heart was soakin and brokin in a young world




KEEPING REGULAR

Droplets of cooking grease on kitchen counters

Rain maintain start it every day

Keep On Trucking, Got to Keep On Trucking Baby

Keep on keeping on till it is all gone

Thus did the two mighty sons of Saturn

To the angel of the assembly in Montego Bay




THE BANE OF ELDERS

But I have this against you, that you tolerate your woman, Jezebel

Thus spoke the elders to Martin, who was not at all pleased

Martin then sped onward, towering like snowy mountains with a loud cry

“Parents just don’t understand, okay here’s the situation!"

My parents went away for a weekend vacation

I got dressed up in those ancient artifacts and hung with Pontius Pilate

After the deposition of the eldest son of Herod, “Help Me God!”



STUDENTS RALLY FOR EDUCATION RIGHTS

Organized right then people are free

Systematic seasonally or semiannually

Develop a list of all tasks

Rain maintain every household

Thus then did they fight as it were flaming fire

Be his courage who could take

Pleasure in the sight of such a turmoil

World Wheat, Rice and Corn

It is in my profession to
Eat the grain of Ceres
Slaughtered by questionable psychic services.
Like the Sugar Daddies
Dazzling is the sheen of their gleaming helmets
Shoot up the accessible 100 packets of heroin
Desperate for high rolling candy
Our citizenship depends on
What is stuck in his belly

11/11 Readings

I found Wenderoth’s Letters to Wendy to be extremely enjoyable and amusing.  It reminds me of a few late night rambles and early morning recoveries between my friends an I- the confessions, the spontaneity, the lack of boundaries, all of it. I particularly enjoyed July 6, 1996- “I was so high on Sudafed and whiskey today that I couldn't eat. I got a Coke -actually five Cokes, as I could refill for free. It's times like this-dehydrated, exhausted, unable to imagine home-that your plastic seats, your quiet understandable room, set beside but not quite overlooking the source of real value, offer me a tragedy small enough to want to endure.”

I absolutely loved Estrella’s Prophesies. The author’s note at the beginning sets a very humorous work, and I enjoyed seeing the transformation of the fortunes. I would like to know the method Baratier used to achieve such tansitions. I found Prophecie XLVI to be particularly amusing.

Though a much different style of writing, Baratier also uses a letter type format. I enjoyed this very much due to the description and the flow of one thought into another. I just feel it transitioned beautifully and reflected the stream of consciousness of an individual who is reflecting on his or her life. I specifically enjoyed the introduction in itself.

I have to say, I liked Stanley Crawford’s Some Instructions least. I just found it to be somewhat dull. I did, however, like the fact that he used aspects of a house or of an environment to describe characteristics of his marriage, wife, and daughter. Drawing parallels such as those does create an interesting piece.

11/11 Reading

Letter’s to Wendy was intensely enjoyable. I knew it was going to fly off the page and hit me the moment I read, “I'd like to spank Wendy's-white ass and fuck her hard.” This was an interesting piece – a confessional is no longer the wooden box in the church but rather a personal letter to a fast food chain. Wenderoth, when speaking of his mother and his incessant problem with anal bleeding is incredibly in-your-face. I was interested to read that Wenderoth lives in Mt. Horeb, WI. I’ve spent a lot of times in Mt. Horeb and didn’t even know there was a Wendy’s there!


Baratier, in In What’s In It, also uses the letter format as a springboard to write. I didn’t enjoy it as much as Wenderoth’s but it was still very interesting to see how he started with a single idea and let the words blossom into something very pleasing at times.

In Estrella’s Prophesies, Baratier uses a different method of writing. He is writing as if he were the “Gypsy” in a carnival fortune telling machine. It’s interesting but get’s quite odd at times. It is really more, I think, an autobiographical work. Again, an interesting way to start writing.

Stanley Crawford writes in, “To My Wife,” uses a “chicken-soup-for-the-soul” type of format to describe, I think, how much of a rut the marriage is in. It’s as if he is sitting at his desk and seeing how items like walls, floors, roofs, electricity all relate to marriage. He lays out everything that he deals with daily in a way that it reflects the state of the marriage. I liked it and found the format to be entertaining. Marriage isn’t a set of rules or lists. It is a day by day event by even situation – exactly as single life is. The difference is you have a partner so there is some coordination of schedules and expectation involved. I think he knows this and is being a little facetious with this piece.

Wenderoth, Baratier, Crawford

Wenderoth - These excerpts were a very fun read. I liked them most because they were very relatable to how everyday people view life, and more simply, fast-food. I thought the lactose intolerance part was especially hilarious, because I can relate to that myself. You always want something that you can't/shouldn't necessarily have and in this case it's dairy, which can be a real downer, haha. These excerpts were just very colorful for the basic simplicity of them. They were filled with adjectives, verbs and huge words, but more or less left the reader to develop the images in their own minds.







Baratier - This piece definitely felt more personal than the previous one by Wenderoth. Here, we were seeing a more emotional side of the people who were writing these letters. I liked reading these because as the reader, I was really peering into the minds of these people and seeing beneath the surface of who they could actually be in their normal day-to-day lives. It's nice to see past the veneer that people usually put up, and even though I haven't a clue of who these people are in real life, I still felt like I could see through them more. There were also a lot of deep areas that I enjoyed too, such as on page 11 were it says "Moderation becomes the question, how often do we displace ourselves, what do we put out". Portions of the text, such as this, make you think a little deeper beyond the just the basic text. The second piece of Baratier set the tone a little differently, but it continued on with the hidden-deeper-meaning undertones as well. This piece from the get-go was definitely a little more fun and upbeat t0 read, and used a lot more 'eye-catching' words as well. Some of the prophesies were a little complicated, but still somewhat enjoyable to read.







Crawford - This piece was definitely more straightforward than anything else we've read in class. Again, it was a very fun and light-hearted read. You didn't even really need to be into creative writing or even English to really enjoy this piece and see the point in it, but nonetheless, it was still really well-written. I didn't really enjoy it more than the other two, but I didn't think it was a bad read either, just not really my cup of tea.

11.11 readings

of the reading assignments, I really enjoyed Letters to Wendy's the most. I, too, enjoy the comfort of Wendy's and reading this was very humorous. The Baratier's In It reading was very imaginative. I felt like through these letters I knew who these people were. With Instructions, you, again, get a feel for these characters. Though we as an audience are not introduced to them directly, you get a feel for them through these series of instructions.

I liked that all of the excerpts were short. It showed that you don't have to write a long novel to get your point across. I like it when authors leave it up to the reader to fill in information. When it's too wordy and descriptive, I just tune out anyways.

Wenderoth and others

When I was reading Letters to Wendy's I thought I was reading a daily journal that belonged to someone. I didn't realize what it actually was. All of the 'comments' chosen seemed to fit really well together. I liked how it started out all innocent like and then it turns inappropriate as the writer talks about the little girl Wendy. Over all, I enjoyed reading Letters to Wendy's. I also found Crawford's writing interesting and entertaining. For awhile I thought I was reading something written by a women. It all sounded very familiar to what I would tell my husband as far as the cleaning and putting stuff back when you're done with it! I also liked all of the symbolism in the writing.

Wenderoth Baratier Crawford

Of the three readings by Wenderoth, Baratier, Crawford, I thought the letters to Wendys is funny, but also now I don't want to get there. Too much detail. I didnt quite get the Crawford rmanual.But Baratier's Estrella was a great read I like the drawings and the reading that was incorporated.

Readings for 11/9

From Marcus, I enjoyed the Terms section, and particularly enjoyed the section on heaven. I felt the description of “Area of final containment. It is modeled after the first house. It may be hooked and slid and shifted. The bottom may be sawed through. Members inside stare outward and sometimes reach” gave a different view of heaven; instead of a place of destination, heaven is perceived as a place of uncertainty. I enjoyed Edson’s excerpt. I felt it was active and possessed some seriousness within the humor. I particularly enjoyed “The Bloody Rug” as is portrays the opposite of what is expected in such a situation; instead of a father beating his child, the child is beating her father. Even within the violence of the situation, Edson incorporates humor as the mother is more concerned with the cleanliness of the house than the beaten father. I enjoyed the detailed narration of Kuo. Cicadas particularly caught my attention due the imagery and comfort it brings me of a summer day.

11/9 readings

From Marcus, I really enjoyed all of the bird imagery. The religious aspect was also intriguing; the overall use of imagery made it stand out to me. I really liked Terms section... the Food section was somewhat unnerving but interesting in its own right; the food "grew" into clothing. This is another thing to add to my growing list of things to read. Edson's excerpt was pretty humorous; I like The Mare's Egg. It seems like a funny history or myth behind the pegasus. And also, The Bloody Rug; the mother doesn't show any concern for the erring father, but rather she cares about the cleanliness of the house. Kuo was a little more difficult to read just because of the disconnected narrative, but I like how it reminds me of Unfinished J. It's sort of an internal monologue at some parts.

Kuo, Edson, Marcus

The story from Marcus was very poetic and I appreciate this type of writing. Also, Kuo takes something we have been doing a lot in class - following a pattern. The stories are realistic and take the view of a child in China around 1940's. Kuo's work was my favorite because it was creative in that we do not think of a Roosters life, or any other object viewing the life of a rooster. The stories were well thought out and each could be a sort of fairytale.

Marcus, Edson, Kuo

To be quite honest, the excerpt by Marcus brought me back to the first couple assignments of the class that I had deemed to not "make sense." I'm really not a fan of the nonsensical writings; the sentence structure was a jumble and the piece contained no real message/meaning nor any sort of storyline. The only redeeming quality of the piece was that it reminded me a lot of Unfinished J and how there was typically a trailing connection of sorts between the sentences. Edson's excerpt was well thought out; I noted many underlying messages, shown often through metaphors. I deem this sort of writing to be fairly creative. Likewise, Kuo's piece kept my interest throughout; Kuo too uses metaphors from time to time to establish a theme or message. The style of the writing is also pretty unique and I enjoyed reading it, despite its brokenness. Furthermore, I like the consistency of the piece; although the style is relatively unique, the storyline and way in which the story was told was consisten which made it easier and more tolerable to read.

Marcus, Edson, Kuo, Cycholl

Marcus - In the beginning, I was really fascinated by all the mentioning of birds, especially with the relation to God. I liked then how Marcus kept relating back to the birds some how. It kept me intrigued with the writing a little better. I started getting confused when I got up to the "Terms" section, mainly just because I wasn't catching on and was entirely lost. I felt this piece was a little all over the place, but he does refer back to a lot of religious figures and symbols, which was also very interesting and made me want to keep reading more into the piece. It reminds me a lot of the band, MewithoutYou's lyrics, which is kind of irrelevant, but at the same time I was reading this I was listening to them and it fit with the piece pretty well.

Edson - I thought the way this piece was set up was very unique and interesting. It was a very descriptive and fun read to do. I really enjoyed "The Dog's Tail" the most. I thought most of the readings were also very relatable as well.

Kuo - This piece was also very descriptive, which made it a fun read. Whenever a piece is more on the descriptive side, it makes it very more pleasant to read through. When you have to read a piece that's very dull and lack-luster and not creative, it obviously won't help your personal writing process, whatsoever. I believe that each of these pieces could be very inspirational to a creative writer, or just a writer in general.

Cycholl - This piece was interesting, but hard to follow through. A lot of it seemed to be random words and pieces thrown together, which were hard to understand, as usual. It also had a bit of a darker, grim feel to it. One thing I did enjoy, was while reading parts pertaining to specific areas, such as the South, I could really feel that atmosphere through Cycholl's words.

Marcus, Edson, Kuo,

Ben Marcus
I really enjoyed this reading each section was a very insightful piece and all the sections were and easy read. I really enjoyed reading the second section titled Food. I liked how each subsection that followed brought the subject of food into the writing in some way. Marcus is also a very descriptive writer. It is extremely easy to draw pictures of his writings in my mind as I am reading.

Russell Edson
The thing that I enjoyed most about Edson's writings was that each piece was small but had a much larger meaning beyond the text. I also enjoyed the way that Edson used animals in a very significant way in his writings. He made me think about things on a much different level. He also makes a lot of reference to death, dying and killing in many of his writings. My favorite section in this reading was The Wonders of Nature. I liked it most because it showed that you really cant judge a book by it cover. You can look at a person and their appearance will not give you one clue as to how their life is or even where they come from.

Alex Kuo
Each section in this reading seems as though it can be a collaborative piece of somebodies own personal journal. Each section is a very descriptive story and reading them made me feel as though I was around experiencing and seeing the things that the text described. Kuo is a very descriptive writer just like the other writers in this section. My favorite section in Kuo writing would have to be Past Perfect Tense. I enjoyed reading this section because the ending was so believing and then she finally woke up from her dream. I also like this section because Kuo mentions that some of the things discussed in this section where never suppose to be spoken about again and she ends the section by waking p out of a dream as if she really didn't tell the secrets.

Marcus, Edson, Kuo, Cycholl

It was hard for me to read the excerpt from Marcus. I really just didn't like it. I guess I wasn't interested in the words he chose to define or the way he defined them. I did like, on the other hand, the excerpt from Kuo. This one I actually did enjoy reading. I liked how each section was like its own little story that was a piece of a larger story. The more I read, the more I got out of the piece. I knew more about the author and the lives of the people involved in the situation. I liked how you as the reader had to consider each section and you could attempt to piece together what the writer was trying to tell. This excerpt by Kuo was my favorite of these excerpts.

MARCUS, EDSON,CYCHOLL, KUO

Marcus reading I like the section starting on p. 24 called TERMS, where he list a few words, then it is he defines, for instance Beef Seeds. In Edson book I enjoyed reading Evenings and The proud Citizen. Cycholl, I like Song Of Three Jonesboro Girls In the Field. Kuo reading I like Absences and Growing Tomatoes. They were interesting to read, but Marcus was better especially when it got to page 2, it was like his own dictionary of terms.

Calvino

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this exerpt. It was very easy and fun to read. The author really made me feel like I was a part of the book. Like he was specifically reaching out and speaking to me. I liked this connection that the author tried to make with the reader. In the beginning when he was talking about getting ready to read and all of the different places to read and postitions to sit in I couldn't help but to picture myself doing those exact same things and imagining that he was talking about me. I really appreciated the amount of reader involvement in this excerpt.

Notes on anything...

George Perece Penser’s note’s on the objects on his desk is such a great idea. I have more than once done almost the same thing just as an exercise to get my fingers clicking on the keyboard. I am also convinced that his method of writing introduces a very simple way to get beyond classic writer’s block. Sometimes writing for the sake of writing is the best way to move organically from one thought to the next. The thoughts or ideas are quite inconsequential but it’s the writing that’s important. How to arrange books? Not an important or deep idea to write about but it opens up any number of other possibilities and ideas that can be tackled by a writer. Very interesting read and I plan to soon read the entire book.

Calvino

Calvino’s novel excerpt was fantastic. Through, what seems like magic, the reader of his book is now the main character in his book. There is no real in depth explanation of scenes or characters but because of cliché, the sense of what a train station is or has been in a similar story, or the main character going through the motions we’ve seen a hundred times before, the reader is as involved in the story as the author. It was great – what I’d call actual interactive reading.

Nov. 4th READINGS

If on a Winter Night a Travel
I really enjoyed reading Calvino's writings. He does so much with the way that he writes that really kept me interested. I couldn't read read fast enough I would get past the first paragraph and be curious as to what was on the next page. The title of the text in no way gives any insight as to how the text reads out. What I liked best about this reading is the fact that Calvino is a very descriptive writer. I also enjoyed the fact that he gets so off into his writings the reader can actually get a sense of feeling that Calvino is writing directly to you as though he knows you. I also enjoyed the parts in the excerpt when Calvino goes back over his writing and tells you what he did to the story for example the section on pages 25 and 26 when he talks about us reading the same pages more then once and he describes it as a publishing mistake. I also like how Calvino jumps in and out of the text and he takes the reader with him. He is very descriptive and he goes from telling a actually story, to basically having a conversation with the reader, to talking about his way of writing.

George Perece
I really enjoyed reading this excerpt as well. George is a very descriptive writer as well. I also like how the title of the section went alone with the text that followed. My favorite section was pages 156 to 164. I really like how descriptive he was in writing this section from him talking about different clothing items that are ready to wear to him discussing different writing methods in sections like 3,4, and 5. I found Calvino and George to be different but similar in many ways

Calvino, Perece

With Calvino's piece, I felt like it was very descriptive, as many as the recent readings have been. I also found some of it to be very humorous and entertaining as well. Some of the reading was a little drawn out but Calvino usually picked up the slack in one way or another. I guess overall, the biggest thing that I enjoy was the descriptiveness because it just added to the entire piece and made you want to become more engulfed into it.

Perec's reading for me was definitely more slow-placed in comparison to Calvino's. While yes, Perec is pretty descriptive, I was just not diggin' this piece personally. When he starts talking about the equations, I just got very lost and confused and began to realize that I was just skimming over that section rather than actually reading it.

That's What Hitler Said

This place is like Nazi Germany.

I'd love to do it.

That's gonna be hard.

You can't go in there.

How long are we supposed to go for?

Where did you put that?

The 33 will do anything.

Put it in the back.

Go beat it.

How much can it hold?

Are you in?

It's raining balls outside.

I'm soaked like a seaman's underwear after several days ocean bound.

Stand by the fireplace.

It's as cold as Santa's testicles out there.

I wish it was Christmas -sigh-

I say mommy kissing Santa Claus

Kissing Santa Claus? "Kissing"

Cheating on Dad?

Wow, that's a bitch

Wonder how that works

George Perece Penser

In Classer, Penser discusses how he never wishes to write the same thing in the same style and further discusses the tools he uses to insure this. Quite simply, one of the most important tools that he discusses is the pen and also the idea of clutter when he works. He additionally talks about the idea of organization and classifying. With this, I say I particularly enjoyed the section about the Eskimos.

If on a Winter's Night a Traveler

I absolutely loved Italo Calvino's If on a Winter's Night a Traveler. The way it is written allows the reader to feel as though the author is speaking directly to them. The detail makes the story extremely tangible and imaginable. Even though it was immediately at the beginning, I Calvino's description of reading a book while being saddled on a horse; it truly made me feel an essence of freedom. Within the story itself, I found particular interest in the lines, "I have already looked out of the front door onto the invisible square, and each time the wall of darkness has driven back inside this sort of illuminated limbo suspended between the two darknesses, the bundle of tracks and the foggy city. Where would I go? The city outside there has no name yet..."

Life, A User's Manual

            I found Perec’s method to be deep in involvement and originality. However, the process did create an extremely complex and confusing story with much description. I did particularly enjoy chapter thirty-five “The Concierge’s Office” about Madame Claveau and the reason for her one distate. It would be interesting to compare the outcomes of the same story while using different board games. Also, I do think that this will probably be one of the more difficult methods we are given to tackle as an assignment. Should be interesting.

Perec Reading 04Nov

Perec is throwing me off a bit not sure why this reading is somewhat different from his reading last week.I know he is talking about methods of writing and thinking about writing, especially on page 32. It seems like on page 33 he is doing a comparison of Italo Calvino style with his.

Book Review- Flash Fiction Forward

I thoroughly enjoyed reading my book Flash Fiction Forward. It is a collection of eighty very short stories (each about one to two pages in length), edited by James Thomas and Robert Shapard. I found the book by asking by my friend, who is an english major at MU, if she had any suggestions for some good short story readings and she gave me this book. The book is quite unique from what I typically read and very different from most short stories. Firstly, they are extremely short, yet, they still manage to convey some sort of meaningful message. Likewise, many of these pieces are successful because they do not require character development or much background information in order to create meaning. In fact, most stories in the book do not establish character names at all; this is incredibly useful in making the meaning more personal to the reader. Using pronouns, the author can easily make the story less specific and increase the likelihood that the story relates with the reader. In addition, many of the stories make profound sociopolitical statements, which add to the quality and importance of the stories. Despite the lack of character development, the stories include a multitude of emotions. These emotions are critical in creating meaning for the reader. Furthermore, it is interesting to read these emotional stories one after another because each emotion is portrayed differently. Moreover, on occasion, the emotion in one story can contrast greatly with the emotion in the following story; this creates an interesting perspective and puts the reader on an “emotional rollercoaster.” For example, in one story, a man commits suicide and in the next story a woman recollects a birthday party as a child and how she received a Barbie doll. One particular story reminded me of the conceptual writing we have been doing in class; the story “Sweet Sixteen” was interesting because an account of a date between a young couple was written all as one sentence. This method was creative by maintaining a flow in the story with the use of punctuation other than periods. Overall, the book was an easy read considering the short length of each story and was a quality read because of the effectiveness of the authors to engage the reader and accurately depict an emotion or message.

Ants- Saliva

It’s a picnic. This picnic is a circus-bizurcus.

Eating, drooling, indulging. Drool.

Drip, Drip, Drop.

And here comes the army, a parading army.

No helmets, no weapons, only armed with hunger.

Devouring. Feast. They feast on the food.

The feast on that food, I wish the food was you

Liar. Bastard. If I can’t take revenge, someone should.

An army, yes an army. Take their provisions and leave you for dead.

I would, you would, we should

Dark, cold, a light

Bright but unseen

They are coming, but not to help

They are here to make certain

It’s why you’re here

Certainty not for help

Run, you cannot move

Immobile, but free in your mind

Your son has left

You still can feel

Feel the cold, feel the dark, feel the pain

How long with this last

Why make someone suffer

Use your lifeline to call home

I don’t want to play who wants to be a millionaire anymore. This sounds way too serious. A cat gets nine lives… I only get three lifelines? Bogus.

Breakfast

Creeping out of bed slowly, I let out a deep sigh. “Ugh.” I pick up the pace and quick step to half-consciously push down the tab to turn off the beeping alarm clock. “Fucking shit.” What was I thinking!? 9:54? Fuck that. Hold down the alarm #1 button and hold on to the minute up button. The time clock rolls in advance. Back to bed. Thank you, half-conscious body; I approve of your decision-making.

Item in the room (play off unfinished j)

The curved cap hides the pointy horn-rimmed glasses beneath. Pontiff’s hat shoots upward; his bow is a mockery. He runs sideways, looking around each corner. Never is a door open while attempting to escape the boogeyman’s grasp. Innocent children sleep with petrified delusions. Parents trip and tumble while racing to the bedside. Their curses at broken toes do not ease their children’s screams.

Renku

Renku

The quiet gesture of leaves

Rustling through time again and again

Time sits very still

And still it goes fast

Grains of sand seeping through faults

Where they fall, we fall

Resting beside you

The lake brings cold wintery rain

I am reborn without sanctuary

Life, a users manual

Very complex, Perec tries to relate stories in a visual or method - game play. His writing is almost scientific because it uses a different thought process that traditional wittings. Pictures typically help people understand ideas, however these images and techniques complicate the story. Coincidentally, many have played Clue, but the game creates a story - not the other way around.

Life a User's Maual

I thought Perec's description was interesting but hard to understand. I think the main focus of his writing's were how a puzzle could be used to tell a story but its not easy and has to have a lot of work go into it. I think another benefit these have is that they are easy to compare to one another and tell some kind of story especially since each puzzle can have a meaning. you to believe that many things we encounter everyday can have a special meaning and you could even write a story about that. Although the way Perec approaches it and explains it might be difficult to understand, it is a very creative technique.

Life, A User's Manual

One of the main things that I enjoyed about Life A User's Manual is how descriptive it was. At times, it was a little hard to follow and felt like there was a lot going on. That was by far one of the least enjoyable things about this reading. Most of the time, it was just very confusing and I often had to go over and re-read things multiple times, which you should do with any reading, but this one definitely did not come with ease. After being breaking everything thing down a bit, I was able to understand the narrative, dialog, etc. more throughly.

The method is very captivating, but also confusing as well. I think the whole set up of it is quite unique and seems to be very helpful to the create writing process. It allows you to take your creativity one step further. First, your just putting words on a piece of paper. Next, your expanding them so much more further than can ever be imagined. By doing methods like George Perec's it helps writers to branch out of their normal writing patterns and explore a different realm. Since Perec's piece was a bit more on the crowded and confusing side, maybe he wanted to game to reflect that. He didn't want this project to be just any old walk in the park. It's weird though how you can take this type of method and turn it into a story. Well, not necessarily weird, but just a little out of the ordinary. I'm intrigued to see where our class will take their stories based on this method...

I think this method will be one of the hardest ones that we will have to tackle in the class just based on my first impression of its complexity.

Life a User's Manual

The Preamble and the brief description of Perec's method was extremely confusing. I understand that the jigsaw puzzle and chessboard are prime analogies for the method of writing; both are complex and challenge the participant. Likewise, Perec's method challenges the reader to read the story differently. I enjoyed reading the excerpts mostly because it was unique. The descriptive manner of the piece added to its success. It was intresting to read mostly because it was as if someone was simply objective; this style of writing is rare in fiction. More often than not, some sort of emtion is outwardly revealed in the writing. In this piece, Perec creates a storyline and presents the setting and background through past events and annecdotes only. This is especially odd to read considering that most stories are told in the present tense and the story unfolds in a sequence of events.

Life A User's Manual

The description given in Life A User's Manual was slightly confusing to me at first. I didn't quite understand how a puzzle or game could be used to tell a story, and I get where the apartment building came in to play. I guess I still really don't get that part. But when the writer explained his method by using the smaller square and how he could put that information into three chapters, I began to understand. This would seem interesting to me if I could actually do it and come up with something like the author did. His writing is obviously much longer and more complex than i think i could ever come up with, but he did work on it for a very long time.

I enjoyed reading about the jigsaw puzzle technique. I never would have thought of a jegsaw puzzle as a way to tell a story. Now, I'm going to be looking at a jigsaw puzzle in an entirely different way the next time I attempt to put one together.

Response to George Perce's "Life A User's Manual"

After reading the preface for this week's reading, I was expecting the actual text of Bartlebooth's Story to be much more random and complicated. From the description of Perce's method I did not always understand how the story would all add up together considering the movement of the writing elements. However, I was suprised while reading the actual story to see that the narrative had a very nice flow to it. I was definately looking to see if I could point out the transitions of elements. Nevertheless, using the lives of all the people in a single building and webbing them together seemed to work out nicely as far as coherients goes. I enjoyed this reading, however I feel when it is my turn to take a run at this sort of technic, the outcome may not be as fluent. After all, George Perce had been working on this styem for a long time.

ITALO CALVINO EXCERPT READING FOR 04NOV

It is a story on how to set the mood for reading a book, and or how to select a book to read. Basically a story on getting prepared to get a good book to read and how to make yourself comfortable. I guess if you don't know already how to do so, now you know. I guess that can be creative in it's ownself.

PEREC'S READING

The Perec's users manuel was helpful. I like how he started with the jigsaw puzzle example. i never thought of a jigsaw puzzle as telling a story, but he describes as made as a story by the maker, it was always just a puzzle to me.But now I can look at in a different way next time I try to put the pieces together. In Life Manuel Book 2 part 3, Cellars, that was different describling whats in cellars the foods.I fopund that interesting and useful.

Primary Colors - Joe Klein (Book Report)

I chose the book Primary Colors originally authored anonymously and later determined to be Joe Klein. I selected this book because it was politically based; however, it had good insight into the Clinton presidency in a strongly impactful way. Like I mentioned during my book report, I found it particularly intriguing to read a book that had so many vast similarities to a particular individual or event but, on the other hand, didn’t specifically depict specific characters or events.

Overall this novel gave me the ability to foreshadow something I was familiar with and relate to a specific instance. Without directly mentioning Clinton or any scandal that took place during his presidency, the reader would find it interesting to be able to relate.

If anyone was interested in politics or a good novel, I would recommend Primary Colors by Joe Klein.

i’d rather you lied

i’d rather you lied
Selected Poems 1980-1998
Billy Childish

Billy Childish is probably the most prolific artists of his generation. Not only is he an accomplished artist and musician, this book of poetry was dran from over thirty volumes including two previously unpublished editions.
His style of poetry is considered raw and seething. He had dropped out of school at 16 years old, and was proud that he had lived on the government dole for 12 years writing and creating woodcarvings and drawings. Ultimately, during this time, music was the dominant style of Childish’s artistic expression. He released more than 100 full length albums he recorded independently with The Poprivets, The Mighty Ceasars, and The Milkshakes. After this period, Childish was diagnosed as dyslexic and his previous troubles in several art schools became clear.
His dyslexia turned out to be a blessing for his poetry as the random, unintentional found language it produced became one of his trademarks. “Wild” Billy Childish writes in what is considered the confessional / amateur style of poetry. He has written openly and explicitly about his love-life, childhood sexual abuse, and troubled relationship with his father.
His poem titled, “my father aged 5” begins;
i ran in there
kicked the door back
n grabbed him
round the throat
i got him over the
sink n then banged
his head aganst the
bottle rack
This is just a small example of the seething honesty he brings to all his art. I have loved Billy Childish’s music for several years and was surprised to find his poetry at Woodland Pattern as I didn’t even know he wrote! Great book, great artist, I highly recommend this to all.

Exercises in style

I was truly amazed at how many different ways there are to manipulate one story over and over again. A few of these methods were obvious, but some were just completely out there. Some of the methods seemed to be a little too similar, however. I understand that there are only so many different ways to manipulate stories, but it felt a little cheap. My favorites were Gossip, Condensed, Comedy, and Cross-Examination. Though I might not use these methods all the time for my writing, it's a good tool to help understand the core of the story and what it important.

Exercises in Style

Queneau’s Exercises in Style was very interesting. I was truly amazed at how many different ways one can write the same story. Granted, Queneau took a very innocuous story to demonstrate these different styles but, as the title suggests, they are exercises and they have a done a wonderful job of teaching me how one can use these styles. I’m rather excited to use one of these on a less boring piece of source material.

Hazel Smith/Exercises In Style pt. 2

Right from the very beginning, I found this Hazel Smith reading to be informative and enlightening to me as a writer. Smith's suggestions on narration were especially helpful because personally, I suck at figuring out how to work with narration and I need a little guidance every once and awhile. I never really realized how in-depth narration can be either, until I read this selection. My mind was completely blown by all of these different types of narrating styles, because in previous English classes we had only gone over very basic narration styles such as first and third person. I also found "the arrow of time" to be a very helpful section because as a writer I have struggled with time and figuring out when to use past, present, and future correctly. The next article was also helpful because even recently with my Auto-Biography, I spent some time trying to fix the order of events that I was using. At first they were all over the place and I had a tendency to jump around a lot, which could definitely cause confusion with any reader. Going from present, to past, back to present, and then the past again was something that I found to be an easier pace to keep up with my own writing.

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I've found all of these exercises to be quite interesting, and very inspiring as well. The way Queneau works with words is amazing, especially with "Rhyming Slang". I found that piece to be the most enjoyable personally of the second half of the book. With a lot of the exercises though, I do feel like random words were just tossed around and I can't really understand the piece at all which just makes me frustrated for the most part. An example of one of the pieces that frustrated me was, "Back Slang". I just did not understand it or it's purpose at all, and I guess that's just a technique that I'm not used to, but still, it just was not connecting with me. The other day I was speaking with a friend, and we were comparing art to creative writing. My friend said she found it hard to appreciate art at all because she felt as if a majority of it was just "thrown together". I agreed somewhat with this statement, because I find it hard to discover meaning in anything where it isn't just thrown at you in someway. I then brought up this class and I discussed some of the activities and readings we have done in class, and how I find it hard to appreciate some of them because I didn't understand them. I think it's easy for people to just thrown something under the bus because they don't understand it completely, which is essentially what I am doing. I am trying to be more open-minded with the readings we are doing, such as Raymond Queneau's and find appreciation in them, but it is definitely hard. I believe comprehending the importance of these writings is critical to help grow as a writer though, so I'm not going to completely give up on understanding this literature. It just has to grow on me a bit more. Overall though, I did enjoy Queneau's exercises and think they did help to inspire me with the play of words, and hopefully I will be able to light this shine through in my future writings.

Cream City: Queer Edition

The book I chose to do my report on was the Cream City Review – Queer Writers Edition. An old roommate of mine recommended it to me, and lent it to me for the report. It is a collection of poems, fiction, creative nonfiction, book reviews, and art. It was published in the fall of 2005. I really enjoyed most of the works in the book. I really enjoyed the short stories and the poetry sections the best. The common theme among all of the pieces is homosexuality. There are some positive and happy pieces, and there are also sad and depressing pieces. This book collects the broad range of emotions all people experience in their lives.

Second Half of Exercises in Style and Hazel Smith

      The second half of Exercises in Style was just as entertaining as the first. It is thus far my favorite work that the class has read. I particularly enjoyed Antiphrasis and also found it creative how on page 124 the entry is in music notes.

Hazel Smith's discussion presents the potential of narration in a similar way as Exercises in Style. Smith additionally conveys different approaches that can be used to tell a story. However, Hazel Smith does tend to concentrate more on the technical and grammatical approach to narration as opposed to the creative sense like Queneau. Furthermore, as Queneau and Smith both proved, through different styles of narration, the writer can relate to different target audiences and convey different messages.

Exercises in Style Cont'd/ Hazel Smith Ch. 5

Exercises in Style Contd
Raymond really came up with a lot of different ways to write. This book was a good read. Even though I got tired of reading the same story I was able to understand each method seeing as though I knew the original story. I was able to understand what things were added, taken out or even completely changed to make the story fit the method of that section. Even thought the story changed a little. I enjoyed more then one method in the second half of this book. My favorite if I had to choose one would have to be Ode.

Hazel Smith
In this reading Hazel focused on the discorse of narratology. Just as Raymond does Hazel is showing us many different methods to write a piece. Hazel shows us the transformed writing and then goes into detail about how this way of writing has an affect on the reader. The one thing that I think that Hazel focuses more on than Raymond is the narrator. Hazel is giving ways to write in order to change how the narrator is involved in the text. I found Raymond's styles of writing to be a lot more interesting then Hazels.

I enjoyed reading the rest of Exercises in Style. This was probably my favorite reading assigment when had in this class. I found it very interesting that the same story could be told in so many different ways. I also had fun writing our own excercises and trying to come up with a new and interesting way to rewrite my original story. Also, reading Hazel Smith was very insightful. Again, I never realized there could be so many ways to tell a story. Narration is obviously an essential aspect to consider when reading and writing any story.

Excercise in style

The second half of Exercise in Style was as entertaining as the first half. It's amazing that the amount of styles can be so vast, yet so different - but all are amazing. The section I enjoy the most in the second half of the book was Permutations. It is simple and follows a pattern but each is entertaining. Hazel Smith offers insight on how to accomplish some of these variations in writing, however it is not as creative in the sense that Queneau was. Hazel Smith is more concerned with proper grammar and speech rather than a multitude of writing styles and voices.

Exercises in Style

I thought these readings were very animated which is the main reason that I enjoyed reading them. The text seemed in most areas to almost jump out at you and call for your attention. The words and adjectives used to describe things throughout the reading were very colorful and definitely helped to add a lot to it. Some areas of the reading I didn't really fully understand such as 'Precision' on page 37 and all of the numbers kind of drew me away from really grasping the text. I also thought that the little animations highlighting each section really added to the readings as well because it made you intrigued to what you were about it read. Overall, I enjoyed the readings and would like to analyze them a little deeper in the future.

Raymond Queneau

I really enjoyed reading these variations so far. It's a little bit repetitive, but I like the different uses of style. A couple that stood out to me: p.43, just because I like this style... I think I write like this; I also like the imagery it evokes. p.48 is very descriptive, which was nice to read. Some books can get bogged down with details, but I think it works well for this passage. I also liked how it kind of trailed off in its own mind. Noble and comedy were the other two that really stood out.

POEMS BY SUSAN FIRER 21OCT BOOK REPORT

I chose the a book titled THE UNDERGROUND COMMUNION RAIL BY SUSAN FIRER, to do my book report presentation on 21OCT. This book has poems and it says many of them were written while she lived in Wisconsin and was close by Lake Michigan and she also teaches at UWM. The instructor said to try to be creative, so I tried to do something out the norm, since the things we write about and read about are out of what I would call the norm. I presented mines like a short movie with animation and tried to tie into the scenes two of her poems, but it could have used a little more editing to get it shorter than what it was. But that was my way of trying to be creative with this project whether it was a flop or not, I did what I thought was creative. Because anything and everything can be a creative new way of doing something is what I learned in this course.

28OCT READING QUENEAU AND SMITH

As I continued reading pages 99 to197 of the Quneau reading for 28Oct, I begin to understand the exercises more, and what he is doing, the story is changing and his examples of the new story is indicated by each exercise. Therefore, my favorite is the Ode on page 125, because that example is like song lyrics. I wouldn’t mind doing something with song lyrics, because then it makes it more interesting. Before I wasn’t sure of what to do.

Hazel Smith’s reading for 28Oct is similar to what Queneau is doing, she has her set of exercises and she is referring to the narrator inside or a narrator outside and changing the story in that format. So both are referring to just changing the story and using other words to tell the same thing.

Exercises in Style

I had fun reading Excersises in Style by Raymond Queneau. I found it very interesting that one story could be told in so many different ways. Simply changing punctuation within the story puts a whole new twist on the original story. For example, in Surprises, every sentence was ended with an exclamation point. This creates an entirely different tone for the story, and although the same storyline is being followed, it is like reading a different one. I also liked reading Double Entry. It was surprising to me to that you could tell the same story in so many styles.

Exercises in Style

Exercises in Style by Raymond Queneau proposes the use many different methods or styles, ninety-nine to be exact, to explain the same event. Queneau focuses on the use of how a language sounds as opposed to how a language is read; furthermore, the different styles convey dialects of all sorts from noble to informal, accusatory to explanatory, etc. Additionally, even translated from French to English, Exercises in Style pushes the limits of language and creates new possibilities for expression.

I particularly enjoyed "Double Entry" on page 21 because of the detail and description of the entry. I also found great interest in "Metaphorically" due the production great imagery as well as emotion, especially through the final line, "In a bleak, urban desert, I saw it again that self-same day, drinking the cup of humiliation offered by a lowly button."Additionally, I found "Apheresis" on page 78 interesting. Although the words are incomplete with missing letters, due to reading several entries about the same event prior to this one, I was able to complete the words while reading them and still understand the story.

The Trouble With Poetry

The Trouble With Poetry is a collection of short poems written by Billy Collins. This book was published by Random House in 2007 and written in 2005. All of the poems in the book were extremely easy to understand. They are all pretty straightforward and simple. Collins does not try to hide anything from the reader, instead he sort of opens up his life in a way and puts it all in his poems. He writes about writing poems, what he's doing as he's trying to write a poem, and about other simple things. Some of the poems are very thought provoking however, as Collins goes in to extreme detail when considering certain simple objects. The book contains subtle, witty, and clever humor. The back of the book says that with accessible language, Collins, opens the door to poetry to those for whom it might otherwise stay closed. I find this very true, as I am not one who really enjoys or understands poetry. I like simple readings, and this was just that. I thoroughly enjoyed reading all of the poems in this book, and I actually might even read other Billy Collins poetry books.

Queneau, Madden, Significant Objects

I can understand telling the same story but in a different way each time, like Queneau’s reading indicates, but I didn’t quite catch on to the exercises in his reading. With Significant objects I can understand the use of objects, not sure why the penny by them, but it made for good reading. Matt Maddens Reading was far more interesting and I liked the cartoon drawings. I liked how he had a play on words with the cartoon Exorcise In Style, instead of exercise he used exorcise and had the scary approach. The Guest Artists that I enjoyed were Leela Corman’s cartoon, and Jazmin Velasco’s cartoon, 3 of the drawings but at in she writes on the drawing, “What was I looking for anyway?” The guy in the drawing is looking in the refrigerator each time.

Exercises in Style

Exercise in Style was extremely meaningful. The thing that I liked the most was how Raymond kept the same story line and applied it to each method. This really helped me see the change in the writing style and I was better able to understand what it was that he was doing. With the style titled Retrograde it was easy to see that Raymond told the story backwards. Another one of my favorite method was Litotes it was short and sweet. This method told the same story as the others only leaving out details and just giving the main point of the story. Double entry was the most enjoyable to read to me. The ideal of saying the same thing twice to me gave humor to the story. This actually made me laugh. Two hours after and a-hundred-and-twenty minutes later lol. I would like to use this method and write a piece of my own.

Matt Madden 99 Ways to Tell a Story is very similar to Raymond's writing. As Raymond did this just shows all the different ways to do the same thing.

The SignificantOdjects web site was very interesting as well. It relates to the readings in a way in which the buyer has to decide what the use of the object will be. I just didn't find an interest in any of the objects on the site.

The Terrible Twos

The Terrible Twos by Ishmael Reed is a social critique that assaults those who are empowered by greed and immediate gratification, quite frankly, Americans. Within the novel, Santa Claus, an actor hired by the North Pole Development Corporation, is kidnapped and replaced by a fake Santa that leads a country rebellion against the United States government and economy out of protest against selfishness. The fake Santa speaks to the people, “Two years old, that’s what we are, emotionally-America, always wanting someone to hand us some ice cream, always complaining, Santa didn’t bring me this and why didn’t Santa bring me that. Nobody can reason with us. Nobody can tell us anything. Millions of people are staggering about and passing out in the snow and we say that’s tough.” Meanwhile, St. Nicholas and a rasta dwarf named Black Peter work together with the President, a private detective, Nance Saturday, and a journalist, Jamaica Queens, to restore peace, order, and holiday cheer to the country. I did enjoy reading this novel and hope to read the sequel The Terrible Threes; in addition, Reed does do an excellent job in making unexpected comparisons and exposing societal errors. However, I do feel as though much of the humor and social comparisons surpassed my comprehension. I do look forward to reading The Terrible Twos again. 

Breakfast (Better late than never)

The morning light shows

through the blue curtains,

shining on

my face.

I squint as I open

my eyes.

I check my phone.

No messages-

he was supposed to call me last night.

Bastard.

I check

the clock.

9:25

I beat the alarm.

I'm glad.

I hate the sound of that damn thing.

Check

my roommates bed.

Empty.

Looks like she never came back

last night.

I text her, "Are you

alive?" I crawl out

of my blankets, the

cocoon of warmth 

resides.

I shiver

and reach for an apple.

That's breakfast and

ha lf the food for the day.

Cut the apple.

Indulge.

Put on some music to greet the day.

First song- "Everyone's

Free

to Wear Sunscreen."

I'm supposed to listen to it to

help me get

better.

FACE (my book presentation)

The book that I presented to the class was FACE written by Benjamin Zephaniah. This book is mainly about a boy named Martin who made the wrong decisions and ended up getting in a car crash that ruined his face for the rest of his life. His face and his whole body got burnt badly from the crash. People had a difficult time looking at Martin in the eye because of how he looked, even his friends couldn't make eye contact with him. After the crash, Martin's friends acted like they didn't even know him, even when Martin was still the same but just with a burnt ugly face. In the end of the story, Martin changes from being a classclown to being somoneone everyone likes. He realizes who his true friends were and didn't care what people thought about his burns. He wanted to live life and have fun.

Don't Break a Leg

theater art phrases luck

anti-oxymoron bullshit

say one thing another meaning

I really hope you do

literal flowers thrown on stage

a champagne jam screaming

backstage pre-show shakedown

spotlights frowning faces at

all the comedy stab stab slash

no credits roll the house

lights rave reviews

The talk of the town.

You have to be the best.

Talk with your hands, I say!

The cat is out of the box... and in the wall.

Please don't steal my yogurt even though I hate

Hello Milwaukee, I am a dragon.

Don't skip class, but start fights.

Didn't you hear? The bitch memo was sent out.

What the fuck! Don't claw at my leg.

It's a dog-eat-dog world out there.

I've still got it! Let my pride be!

Weeee needdd vicessss.

You're worth 3 1/2 stars, but we'll give you 5!

This movie is garbage

Why the fuck would I waste $10

I can't believe this

Do onto other as you would have others do onto you

DODO onto others as you would have others DODO onto you.
Clowns pooping on their boyfriends face. Be sure to use a wet-nap.
Who knows what they’re fucking them on the road. A guy picks up
a hitchhiker and rubs her knee, I’m no queer. Grandpa died when his
body shut done again by organ grinders with monkeys who with hats
and fangs. Why aren’t monkeys venomous platypuses are but things
on their feet spurs. Why is venom always in a sac? Are boll sacks
filled with venom? Some girls must think so. Babies having babies.
I said that in front of a pregnant mother and didn’t even realize I said it.
Small headaches take an Ibuprofen 500mg of numbness.

Numbness, a good version of numbness would be knocking a guy out.
Shotgun, hit by a car, it all works. Cars of big mass with no bumper, that
Way it will grind the headache out of your face. Dismantled of course, no
Face left, who cares, the face ache is gone right? Try smoking a cigarette,
Those are supposed to be good at getting rid of face aches. Your face aches
No more, bang your arm against a cow or chimpanzee, this will give you
that arm ache you’ve been waiting for, however you will forget about your
face ache from being hit by a car with no bumper. And that is a bumper less car
going through a field in the middle of nowhere. You fall to the ground and
stare up at the whirling sky, little birdies whirl around your head.

splat

What seems random but actually a fractaline pattern. A mathematical certainty.
Uncertain about it's final form.
The clocks of the world unfold leaving all in yesterday's know but holding
To their vest the events of next.
Putressence, gangreen. Sounds like they
Could be flowers inviting pollenators
From every Shires ende
The tendre croppes.
A science-fiction nightmare with greenies from other dimensions and
Shapeshifting into frienemies.
Due South, dress warm, make sure
Your ears are covered for fear of pink skin
Fading to white and then
To black.

The Acidity Disguised As Ambience

Big dogs, large dalmations,
Summer pukes on the back of the driver's head
Whirling, sweating, falling, flailing
crawling,
Loving, like, strangers with dirt, like, all under their nails.
Body odor wafting through the cement and steel cage.
There's sawdust, mesothelioma candy,
Neon sticks, lollipop binkies,
All in an effort to reach...
Expereinces and memories of never
floating endlessly in the base of the spine.

I Remember

I remember Rice a Roni tan shag carpeting in
The sunken livingroom with a see through fireplace
My mom's orage and red pantsuit.

I remember ice cube trays made for
Making home-made popcicles with oragen juice.

I remember seeing a horse with
A hardon that looked like a barber pole
At Georgia O'Keefe's birthplace.

I remember needing pants to cover my whole shoe
Zips tennis shoes with the commercial
The one where the kid jumps over tables, streets and trees.

I remember my Incredible Hulk belt
And lunchbox and thermos
And Rage-Cage.

I remember my dad's Pontiac J
2000
It smelled like farts.

Quaint

Forest on fire
Walking the path I look up
A silent autumn

Blue skies moving
Backtracking the long cold night
Rain falling fast

Filling pothole hole dent divot
Drowning the butts and wrappers
until they float yellowed

Asthmatic Couch

The couch was for sale outside near the weeds. Wow it looks windy outside. I could really enjoy a good swim right now, wait the water must be freezing. Either way I was talking to a friend up north and she was saying the snow didn't stick because the ground wasn't frozen. Frozen? Apparently 32 degrees isn't cold enough these days. If I see another person putting up Christmas lights I may go insane. speaking of Christmas lights, I'm really getting sick of meople cutting me off, and not even on the streen, but on the pavement in the parking lot. Whew.

The old people shouldn't be allowed to drive anymore. Who would let the crypt keeper get behind the wheel of a car? Just because they are moments from death doesn't mean I should have to go down iwth them. They just back up without looking! Their beady little eyes hide behind coke bottle glasses that haven't been updated since 1972. Their sick, leathery, yellowed hands can barely grasp the wheel due to their arthritis. I can smell the death from here. And why do they all drive such behemouth cars? So short they can barely see over the wheel yet they drive whales through the WalMart parking lot.

Parking lot is always crowded, crowded with cars, like a no holds barred never seeing any stars, from a far, I look so bizarre never mind that isn't all afar. Far far away I went astray.

INFESATION

Around I
Begin looked shelf
Behind bag
On tub almost Philadelphia plain cream cheese
As I
Toaster
INFESTATION current apple bleach mixture
Smell nauseating
But bugs death
As toaster
One hobble around helplessly
And I decided unappetizing enough I it

Break/Fast

Rubbing eyes

Spinning cogs.

Clothes FIRST

Then conSUMPtion.

Pull out Pissarro

Set the TIME.

BEV / BEV / BEV

and Cream CHEESE.

Orange wire the CIRcles.

CRISPED to the feel

CRUNCHY to the tongue.

Thank BEES and COWS in the mix.

HOMAGE to INDIA, I take QUIET sips.

Scoring Prose into Poetry

I know what I want
food
but I'll soon want something specific
Muffins!
There were leftover
apple cinnamon muffins from
last night
that and
I'm pressed for time
The bus
arrives at 8:01
I pull two from the plastic bag
Checking to make sure the bottoms weren't burned
I grab
the orange juice from the cool refrigerator
and pour myself a glass.

~Kent

Mohammed Degentesh McGee Sullivan

Mohammed must have a thing for the words spook and spooky. This fascination is too much. His style of creativeness is bone chilling. He has a bizarre way of telling a story or in this case writing prose. But he is not boring. Degentesh was more of what I am used to reading, and I enjoyed reading, I Don’t Tire Quickly and Someone Has Been trying To Poison Me. Simple writings but some of it is as though she is writing about a paranoid person. Michael McGee said one method he used was to Google Angie Dickenson to see what comes up. I like the Google method it is fun and interesting, you never know what will show up with that method. But I wouldn’t put in Angie Dickenson, it would have to be Michael Jackson because some very interesting writings might show up if his name is Googled. Sullivan seems to have different ways of writing prose and I like page 21 the Letter Poem, but I didn’t know what to make of pages 22-23.

Breakfast

Its 7am in the morning
The alarm is on
BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ
I turn of the irritating alarm ready to make my head explode
Out of bed and freezing in my room
Then I realize its Monday morning which means CINNAMON ROLLS
Warm and crispy
Straight out of the oven
Hot icing sliding down the top like a slow motion reply
I take the first bite and chew slowly to experience the long lasting flavor
So delicious it felt like a party in my mouth
then on its way to clog my arteries

BREAKFAST

BREAKFAST, BREAKFAST, SH…..T., I’ve been up all night
I went to work Sunday night at 10pm and got off work
Monday at 6am when my SHIFT ENDED….
I still didn’t go home still didn’t go to sleep. Still didn’t eat BREAKFAST.
WHY NOT?
Because I had a weeks worth of dirty laundry in the car,
Washing machine not working had to do my laundry, got in car left work
went to laundry mat and washed and dried clothes got there
around 645am,only person in there doing laundry, people next door sitting in George Webs had BREAKFAST. No not me.
Got a call about 715am to run pick up someone left my clothes in dryer at laundry
It was 730am
HUNGRY SLEEPY!
Got back to laundry at 9am, began folding my clothes.
BREAKFAST!
But too sleepy to eat
But got home by 10am and started doing homework that is due on 14th October.
No SLEEP
Then opened fridge saw a bowl with CHICKEN SALAD in it. Got 4 pieces of oat bran bread and made a CHICKEN SALAD SANDWICH
UM, UM CHICKEN SALAD
FINALLY GOT TO EAT CHICKEN SALAD
Fresh CHICKEN SALAD consists of small cut up pieces of the chicken breast cut made with sandwich spread, and small cuts of a red apple, and small pieces of cut onion, served with or without lettuce, two of the pieces of bread were toasted brown and the chicken salad spread in between the two pieces of toasted bread, then the other sandwich was made without toasting the bread. Not my usual BREAKFAST, but it was delicious all the same. I sat at the table and gobbled it down and then drank a bottle of kiwi strawberry flavored water. Then I drank a cup of coffee, with lots of sugar in it and milk. I call it café con leche. By then it was after 11am, I sat at the table with the computer doing my homework, trying to finish. By 1230pm took myself a shower, changed clothes and combed my hair. Then it was 113pm, decided to take a nap so I wouldn’t be so sleepy trying to drive myself to school to make it there by the start of my 330pm class. Still HUNGRY so I spotted a bag of caramel cream candy and ate as I was driving, Don’t know what will happen in two weeks when my two mini term classes start at 930am and 1230pm on Monday and Wednesday because BREAKFAST SH…T, I might not get chance to have, but I guess I am thinking too far ahead. I also had a bottle of Sobe Green Tea and drank it in class, because tonight I start this routine again at 10pm, got only an hour of sleep so far. Still HUNGRY, still SLEEPY, but hopefully I will have time tomorrow to make myself a better BREAKFAST than CHICKEN SALAD SANDWICH.

*When I Woke Up*

When I got out of BED, I took a SHOWER.
After I took a SHOWER, I brushed my TEETH and got DRESSED.
After I got DRESSED, I packed my MATH book and NOTEBOOK, my GEOSCIENCE, and my METEROLOGY notebook in my BACKPACK.
I saw my STARBURSTS in my drawer, so I PACKED those too.
My KEYS went in my bag, my I.D. went in my back POCKET.
I CLOSED the room DOOR, as well as the SUITE door.
I HEADED for the elevator, PUSHED the down arrow and waited.
The elevator came, I got INSIDE. Went STRAIGHT down to the 1st floor.
I got out, and STARTED to walk towards Bolton.

HoCho

I went to the cabinet
and traced my
fingers
against all the pots
and pans
until I reached my second
smallest
silver body
black handle
copper bottom pot
I pulled it out from under
the white
plastic
noddle strainer
I filled the
silver body
black handle
copper bottom pot
with water.
I boiled the water
and poured it into my yellow
Tinker Bell
over sized mug.
I mixed the hot coco mix with a small
silver
spoon.
I blew on the liquid to cool it
I took a sip
and
enjoyed.