I really enjoyed reading Lyn Hejinian's "My Life." Her color and imagery usage really hit a note with me. The flow seemed a little off at times, but I think that's just because she started phrases abstractly before stating her point or continuing the "story line." I think I would add this to a list of things to read in the future.
As for the rest of Unfinished J, I liked it about the same. The internal sort of monologue is an interesting angle. I think it might be a cool thing to experiment with.
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