Response to Murphy and Hejinian

After continuing to read Letters in Unfinished J, I saw much of what I read earlier: random memories and random ways of writing about it. I did still enjoy this reading because many of the lines carried out the author's thought process. I could understand most of the time what she was thinking, although the style she wrote was still different each line. I felt that this writing tended to be more descriptive than the first section of pages read. But that could seem that way to me because I hadn't read the first section since last week.
Lyn Hejinian's "My Life" was pretty good. I liked the use of color in the begining and the many references to her childhood and remember moments with her father. I think her piece was a little easier to read compared to Letters in Unfinished J. I felt the stream of thought was more consistent and understandable in "My life."