Marcus, Edson, Kuo

To be quite honest, the excerpt by Marcus brought me back to the first couple assignments of the class that I had deemed to not "make sense." I'm really not a fan of the nonsensical writings; the sentence structure was a jumble and the piece contained no real message/meaning nor any sort of storyline. The only redeeming quality of the piece was that it reminded me a lot of Unfinished J and how there was typically a trailing connection of sorts between the sentences. Edson's excerpt was well thought out; I noted many underlying messages, shown often through metaphors. I deem this sort of writing to be fairly creative. Likewise, Kuo's piece kept my interest throughout; Kuo too uses metaphors from time to time to establish a theme or message. The style of the writing is also pretty unique and I enjoyed reading it, despite its brokenness. Furthermore, I like the consistency of the piece; although the style is relatively unique, the storyline and way in which the story was told was consisten which made it easier and more tolerable to read.