Murphy and Heijinian

Sheila Murphy’s reading seemed to ramble on about different thoughts, one after another rather just stay for awhile on one subject matter, especially on page 34, where she writes about bungee jumping then goes on to write about work and what to wear to sleep. I wasn’t sure what to make of her writings other than random sentences no connection between one with the other. On the other hand Lyn Heijinian’s reading was more thorough and she wrote about her father and childhood and she was very descriptive and I could comprehend that this is about her memories of her life and what she recalled as a young child. She was more detailed and didn’t just ramble on randomly.