Wednesday, November 11, 2009

11/11 Reading

Letter’s to Wendy was intensely enjoyable. I knew it was going to fly off the page and hit me the moment I read, “I'd like to spank Wendy's-white ass and fuck her hard.” This was an interesting piece – a confessional is no longer the wooden box in the church but rather a personal letter to a fast food chain. Wenderoth, when speaking of his mother and his incessant problem with anal bleeding is incredibly in-your-face. I was interested to read that Wenderoth lives in Mt. Horeb, WI. I’ve spent a lot of times in Mt. Horeb and didn’t even know there was a Wendy’s there!


Baratier, in In What’s In It, also uses the letter format as a springboard to write. I didn’t enjoy it as much as Wenderoth’s but it was still very interesting to see how he started with a single idea and let the words blossom into something very pleasing at times.

In Estrella’s Prophesies, Baratier uses a different method of writing. He is writing as if he were the “Gypsy” in a carnival fortune telling machine. It’s interesting but get’s quite odd at times. It is really more, I think, an autobiographical work. Again, an interesting way to start writing.

Stanley Crawford writes in, “To My Wife,” uses a “chicken-soup-for-the-soul” type of format to describe, I think, how much of a rut the marriage is in. It’s as if he is sitting at his desk and seeing how items like walls, floors, roofs, electricity all relate to marriage. He lays out everything that he deals with daily in a way that it reflects the state of the marriage. I liked it and found the format to be entertaining. Marriage isn’t a set of rules or lists. It is a day by day event by even situation – exactly as single life is. The difference is you have a partner so there is some coordination of schedules and expectation involved. I think he knows this and is being a little facetious with this piece.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Sir,
    Your writing is supberb and I would like to know more about what makes someone like you tick. How did I know you were a fella even though your name is Jan? It is because I stalk. I stalk you and others in a way that makes the world uneasy. I stare and peek and masturbate while you brush your teeth. I love you teeth for some reason. I think it's because you have that one eye tooth that is indented just a touch from your front teeth. Was this intentional? Bravo if it was and praise the lord for such perfect artistry if it wasn't.

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